1. I never have been an good story teller; I tend to have trouble getting to the point. I know that I have written better stories than this, but I'm a little rusty on my writing skills right now.

2. I think my beginning and ending are both good, however the middle seems to get a little bit boring.

3. I could somehow add more dynamics to the middle of the story to make it a little bit less dry.

4. I made a list of ideas, but ended up using the first one

5. Since it was a story from my life, chronological order made the most sense.

6. I didn't use any graphics, but I think a picture of a young child writing could have been good.

7. The responses were very helpful. I agreed with most of the comments, and made changes accordingly

8. I would try to spend more time proof reading my first draft so that the responses I got would have been even more helpful.